HughY Setting and Story Opening

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The smell of the oil creeps around my face as I hear gun fire. The cold chilled air runs down my spine as I swiftly across to the other building. The green glow from my headlight just gives me vision to see through the dim light. I jump over the table just before the enemy detects me. The garage is filled with cars for me to hide behind. I feel the rubber handle on my pistol as I screw on the cold, slippery silencer.

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WALT: describe the setting of a story using ‘show’ not ‘tell’

SC:

- to use descriptive language to help the reader visualise the setting

- to use language that activates the readers’ senses e.g smell and sound

- to use similes and metaphors to describe the setting

- to use interesting vocab to describe the setting

1. Gun fight

2. Glow from my headlight, slippery silencer & enemy detects me

3. B

4. It was obvious that it was a gunfight, but I think that was because you told me instead of showing me.